Big Time Attic: Chapter 99: Alpha Danger Squad

Thursday, April 12, 2007

At 3:27 AM, Tad. said...: Cool comic! I like it.

Question: Would it read better if "JIB! That's it!" were in panel 6 instead of 7? Just an idea. It might be too big a hassle. Still a funny comic the way it is.
At 8:41 AM, danno said...: i dont get it...

are you implying women are sex objects?

AND are you implying thats how men view them?

AND thats how comics/sci-fi/media-in-general treat them?

...science fiction, INDEED!
At 9:13 AM, Kevin Cannon said...: Tad. -- Yeah, that's how the first script read, but I decided that I wanted the reader to believe that the issue with Sierra's jumpsuit was settled as the reader moved into the third row. I also like the ridiculousness of a huge, crammed word balloon, even at the expense of good storytelling.
At 12:01 PM, Tad. said...: Ah, deliberate decision, then. Okie doke.
At 5:38 PM, Julia Vickerman said...: I like Sierra's weird scoliosis body in the first panel.
Funny stuff, Cannon!
At 6:07 PM, Kevin Cannon said...: You would!